There are some minor grammar issues, mostly inconsistent verb tense, but despite those the fic is great. The different EMIYAs' histories are compelling. Each is wildly different, but still is Emiya Shirou at the core. Everything is wrapped up nicely by the ending, and this universe's Emiya Shirou learns a lesson from his Holy Grail War.
FanficRecs Great, despite tense issues
There are some minor grammar issues, mostly inconsistent verb tense, but despite those the fic is great. The different EMIYAs' histories are compelling. Each is wildly different, but still is Emiya Shirou at the core. Everything is wrapped up nicely by the ending, and this universe's Emiya Shirou learns a lesson from his Holy Grail War.